Apparently to some this'll just be another unreadable, not understandable mess translated by somebody who's first language isn't English and is Asian. The internet's kinda weird, isn't it? Ahem. Anyway, while I know that it may not read or flow the best, it is still understandable so if you can't understand, then you're probably just an idiot who doesn't understand English yourself. Also, if you have problems with my TL's or anything in general, then the least you could do is actually bring those problems to me instead of bitching elsewhere so I can deal with them. That's all, so thank you, and enjoy the chapter.
P.S. - Michelle and her father talk to each other about the latter (even her father himself) in third person, but that's just how the Japanese speak, so I had to adapt it. Example: "Michelle, will you come with father?" to "Michelle, will you come with me?" See what I mean? I just wanted to bring that up. Also, on pages 2-3, it actually says, "A light of life flickers. Between the threshold of life and death she is!", but that sounds a bit odd so I changed it to "A life light flickers. She is between the threshold of life and death!". There's also some other stuff but I doubt anyone's interested.
